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   작성자   alex64    등록일   2020-03-17
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I moved to Busan

I moved to Busan 4 days ago. I'm to sad because in Daejeon I left my friends. ㅠㅠ So I want to meet with my friends. ㅠㅠ But I will meet them 1 year later. I'll wait for my friends.  Busan is very cold so I have a cold. ㅜㅜ The corona19 is very serious in Busan so I hate Busan.

Good job, Seungyeon! I am looking forward to your next compositon. Please read again the corrections that I made above. ^^

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