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   작성자   marina22arp    등록일   2019-11-07
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Correction:

Yes, we need land.
Because we are standing, lying, and walking on it so we need it.
And if there's no land maybe we can't stand, lie, and walk.
So land is important and we need it.

Comment:
Good job, Lee! Please avoid word redundancy in a sentence. Try to use pronouns to replace those words. ^^

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