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   작성자   mum13    등록일   2019-06-11
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Thesedays people sometimes use a 3D printer. But do you know anything about 3D printer? There are many ingredients of the 3D printer. People use plastic, iron even some soil with it! So, it does not pollute the nature and it is good for nature. However, 3D printer can't print something fast. It is a big problem. If someone remove this problem, the 3D printer will be more popular. How do you think about it? Do you like it?

CORRECTIONS:

These days, people sometimes use a 3D printer.

But do you know anything about 3D printer?

There are many materials that's on the 3D printer.

People use plastic, iron and even some soil with it!

So, it does not pollute the nature and it is good for nature.

However, 3D printer can't print something fast.

It is a big problem.

If someone eliminate this problem, the 3D printer will be more popular.

What do you think about it?

Do you like it?


COMMENTS:

Great sentences! And yes, I do love it! That was a great suggestion. I hope that there would a great inventor that could get rid of that problem. I wish to hear more perspective from you, Ella. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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