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   작성자   boram0806    등록일   2019-05-15
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Wednesday, June 15, 2019 If I want to go BTS Concert, I need to become a member of fan club. But, It is so hard for me because, I need to test about BTS and that is so hard for me. That question need BTS Album and it is very expensive for me. So, my mom didn't buy that. I am so sad to can't go to concert. If you know person who work in broadcasting station, please call me. TT

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Wednesday, June 15, 2019.

If I want to go to BTS Concert, I need to become a member of a fan club.

But, It is so hard for me because, I need to take a test about BTS and that is so hard for me.

The answer to the question can be found in BTS Album and it is very expensive for me.

So, my mom didn't buy that.

I am so sad that I can't go to the concert.

If you know someone who works in broadcasting station, please call me.


COMMENTS:

Good sentences! I wish that you can still get a ticket for the concert. I wanna hear more from you, Esther. Keep on writing!

-Lovely

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