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   작성자   alex64    등록일   2021-11-16
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Do you know what is the famous machine in the world? It's the smartphone! Ye!we have it at our hands! And Alexander Graham Bell just made a cell phone first. If there was no smartphone the world will be uncomfortable. And I love u SAMSUNG!

 

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Do you know the famous machine in the world? It's the smartphone! Yeah! We have it in our hands! Alexander Graham Bell was the first person who made the cellphone. If there was no smartphone the world will be uncomfortable. And I love SAMSUNG!

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