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   제 목   postive and negative of sunlight    상 태  
   작성자   alex64    등록일   2021-10-19
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First,postive of 'sunlight'is make healthy plants,and when theres no sun light we can't see anything!and when we just get sunlight we can get an vitamin-D. and negative of sunlight is when we get too much sunlight our skin will be little burned(?). And sunlight also promotes skin aging, such as dehydrating skin cells to dry and rough skin to lose elasticity and wrinkles. done.

 

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First, the positive of sunlight is it makes healthy plants. When there's no sunlight, we can't see anything! When we get sunlight, we can get a vitamin-D. The negative of sunlight is when we get too much sunlight, our skin will be burnedSunlight also promotes skin aging such as dehydrating skin cells to dry, rough skin to elasticity and wrinkles.

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