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   작성자   danniel1129    등록일   2021-10-07
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harry receive firebolt in christmas. ron says firebolt? no way is it really? is it firebolt? don't excited oilver harry says depressed no longer have it was confiscated chrismas:크리스마스:명사,receive:받다,confiscated압수(당하다):동사 excited:흥분,depressed우울하다:형용사

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Harry receives firebolt in Christmas. Ron says, "firebolt?" "No way, is it really?" "Is it firebolt?" Don't be excited Oliver. Harry says, depressed no longer.  It was confiscated on Chrismas.
:크리스마스:명사,receive:받다,confiscated압수(당하다):동사 excited:흥분,depressed우울하다:형용사

 

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Keep on writing, Danniel! I will wait for your next essay. - T. Clariz

 

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